Grammar Boss Level

There are 60 grammar and spelling errors in this paragraph. To pass the level, you need to get the boss down to 25% – so, in other words, you need to find at least 75% of the errors to beat him. It is double-spaced so that you have room to make corrections.

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Margu the Orc sauntered confident into the large open smelly hall and stared.

Along with Grabber they looked at there large armies standing awkward.

Margus’ army is recognized by their large red banners. Grabber’s army has

purple baners. Margu being a Cave Orc and Grabber being a larger Hill Orc. so,

Margu anticipated that Grabber would stir up some trouble.

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Looking close, Grabber said, “You’re army looks like chilren. Its an offense to

Orc-kind.”

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Margu replied, “You is to blind. And your sent reeks of perfume. (this is a very

bad thing to say to an Orc). Their every bit as tough as your pitifully excuse for

an army.”

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“Your a fool. There is no differences between my army and the greatest Orc

army of all time! it’s ranks stretch two the very edges of the hall. My soldiers is

well known for being brutal. You cant even compare them to another Chieftans

army. When you army stands next to mine their, you can see all the differences

such as, their hugely size, large teeth, terrible disposition, and etc.”

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Margu laughed. I will tell you to things. First. They are clumsy. That means they

will do bad things, like trip easy, bump others’ often, unnecessary fall, and

generally attack slow. You need make them practice more. Then, you can train

into a stronger army.

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‘Second, my army is smarterer. That means we have more advantages, such as

quicker thinking, larger brain, and faster reflexes. We can strategic plan several

moves ahead. Also my troops won’t make the same mistake over and over

again. They learn. Our armies effectiveness will be very different indeed.’

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Grabber became irate. His face truned red (which looked pretty odd on a green

Orc). He yelled “I will show your and your stupid smart brains! Hill Orcs, follow

my!”

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With that, Grabber turned and walked forward, looking at his troops behind him

and walked right into an open pit. And every one of his Orcs followed him in the

pit to there doom.

2 thoughts on “Grammar Boss Level

  1. Pingback: The Grammar Boss | Intentionally Off Path

  2. Very cool…I is gonna give dis to my kids to work thru… Well see how they done did it!

    I, too, am a grammar and punctuation enthusiast! Thanks for sharing! I hear you will have some Seattle visitors…the Andersons! Yay!!!! Have a good week. : ) Alicia (Kramer)

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